There was once a
competition held amongst all of the animals in the world to determine
who should lead them. A council was held and all animal races sent a
representative. They met up and tried to decide on a way for them to
choose a leader. The fish of the sea wanted to have a competition to
see who could swim the fastest and the furthest. The animals that ran
on land wanted to have a race. The simians wanted to have a contest
to see who could climb the highest tree. The debate went on for weeks
with a resolution no where in sight.
As the debate raged
amongst the animals, two little boys decided to take a nap on a
boulder by the river they were playing with. They slept as sound as a
rock which caused it to grow rapidly. Eventually the rock grew so
high that the boy’s own tribe could not find them. And still the
boys slept.
It came to the
attention of the animals in the council that the boys were trapped
high atop the magic boulder. Someone would have to reach the top to
try and wakeup the boys to bring them down. It was decided that since
they could not produce an impartial competition to choose their
leader that this would serve in its stead.
Every animal in the
council tried jumping onto the rock wall to try and reach the top.
From the smallest animal to the largest they all tried jumping onto
the cliff face but they all fell short as the rock reached high into
the heavens. However, there was one who did not try jumping onto the
rock. Measuring-Worm upon learning of the boys terrible fate
immediately started climbing up the rock. For one whole season he
climbed steadily up until he reached the boys. He then woke them up
and together they climbed back down the way they came.
This is why the rock
is known to all as Tutokanula, as it is where Measuring-Worm became
leader of all the animals.
Author’s Note: The
original story is known as Tu-Tok-A-Nu'-La
(El Capitan). In the original story two boys get stuck high atop
a growing rock and all the animals hold a special council to try and
save the boys. All the animals try and jump onto the top of the rock
but all fall short. Finally Measuring-Worm spends an entire snow
climbing his way to the top where he gets the boys and brings them
down. I liked this story because it shows that even if you do not
have the talents everyone else possess you can still succeed if you
persevere. The rock is known as El Capitan to white men and that gave
me the idea to have the council be convened for a competition but
they end up helping the boys.
Bibliography: The
stories from these reading notes come from Judson's California and Old Southwest unit. The specific story is the Tu-Tok-A-Nu'-La (El Capitan).
Hey Adrian. I will be honest. I don't usually like stories that use animals as their main characters. I am not sure why, it always just seems like that forces a story to happen rather than letting one develop naturally. That being said, I really enjoyed this story. I liked the details you put in to it. Well done, I hope I get to read more of your work in the future.
ReplyDeleteHey Adrian! I liked how your story was formatted . I think that you could have added more information through dialogue between the animals or many pick one and have it tell the story from it's point of view? I don't know. It worked well but I think that you can push yourself further in the future.
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